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Venom |
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Liz Sinclair Member
since 2006-05-06
Posts 93Atlantis 
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Venom --and the tyranny of such thoughts was manifested into the intricate designs of disassociation. you have a way to go, he said to the people. but, on premises of lacking inheritance, you've lost the way. no courtyards for a ballroom blitz-- we're going to sit this one out. & they sighed relief (though death was imminent) then bowed their heads. we are the chosen implications of a faltering legacy, notoriety has expired and consumption is our god. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
oh, I am enjoying these unique portraits of our dying self-indulgent social orders |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Wow Liz! Just wow!! |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Excellent...by they way, my ex-husbands grandmother ( which I am still very close to ) is named Elizabeth Sinclair  |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I am really enjoying your poetry, as in the words hides many things to think about. This being another example - well done indeed. |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Damn...this is beyond excellent....powerful & poignant....I've read it several times already and am still blown away. You're very talented, I wish I could write more like you. Melissa~ Intellectually I know that Canada is no better than any other country. Emotionally I KNOW that Canada is the best country in the world! |
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Liz Sinclair Member
since 2006-05-06
Posts 93Atlantis |
I'm sorry for the delay in thanking everyone for their generous commentary...Work, Work, Work. Seriously though, it's much appreciated. Take care. Liz...Carpe Diem |
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