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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Thinking Sad day My friends are dead Dreary gray I lie in bed Digging wit My memory store Straitening it For evermore Alas alack I see a light There seems a crack A lose of write Some memories fell Into the sea No longer dwell Inside of me How could it happen? You think it age You think I’m lost In turn of page Sad day, sad day A Raven’s haste Beckons his way What a waste |
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shades of paul Member
since 2005-12-14
Posts 370In Reality |
It's a sad poem, but it's all good ! paul shades of peace,love,and happiness to you |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
paul, A sad thank you my friend. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Sy..A day is never sad nor a waste with you in it!  ~Sending  &  your way~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Nancy,  back at you. |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
 dang, that is sad. "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
When YOU think It comes out Beautiful Liz |
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RedStoneEB Senior Member
since 2003-06-08
Posts 772uk |
some memories fell Into the sea No longer dwell Inside of me Liked these lines |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Susan, Dang, thank you. Elizabeth, Beauty is in the eyes of the beholder, thank you dear. RedStoneEB, You picked a good one, thank you. |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
Whereas thoughts are big or small we think mind can't hold them all, so going through life's daily motion, they blend like raindrops in the ocean. Matter, gray, does not make sense of God's knowing, so immense, yet pure desire will always hear it, Love's reflections held in Spirit. hugs, Klassy [This message has been edited by Klassy Lassy (05-09-2006 05:05 PM).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Sy, I'm not really sure what to say...I looked at the form here and was surprised this was really by you...a form so new and different! It's so good to see you experimenting with other forms, just wish the subject matter wasn't so sad. So very touching. Sending a  and a |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
passing, Don't worry it will change. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Klassy A Klassy reply, thank you sweety. |
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