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1st Poetry Post - Definition of a Poet

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Devious Intellectual
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0 posted 05-08-2006 03:21 PM       View Profile for Devious Intellectual   Email Devious Intellectual   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Devious Intellectual

I am a hip hop artist and write my verse poetic...let me know if this is a good start for a poem....

Definition of a Poet (11sylables)

Swift gentle strokes formulate compositions
Put people in awe like art exhibitions
Fueled by prolific thoughts exhale emotion
It's a still picture soon launched into motion

Photographic caputuring you in a 'flash'
Diving past reality without a spalsh
I'm not down to earth my, head's high in the stars
Foremost goal,to help those heal internal scars

Words hold the complexties of genetics
Deciphered with the theories of aesthetics
Takes time to understand like hieroglyphics
Secret police issue me Pyro~tickets

Poetically I consume the brainswashed thought
Then spit out wonder leaving the masses taught
As soon as my work beging to open eyes
Censorship awakens and begins to rise

2bcontinued
© Copyright 2006 Paul - All Rights Reserved
exhale
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since 06-13-2003
Posts 648
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1 posted 05-08-2006 03:35 PM       View Profile for exhale   Email exhale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for exhale

Words hold the complexties of genetics
Deciphered with the theories of aesthetics
Takes time to understand like hieroglyphics


Your rhythm is so prominent and incredible,
keep posting, I'll be watching for it.
howardtsu
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since 01-29-2006
Posts 678


2 posted 05-08-2006 04:25 PM       View Profile for howardtsu   Email howardtsu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for howardtsu

this is a good start

I'm not down to earth my, head's high in the stars
Foremost goal,to help those heal internal scars

i like this line  
nakdthoughts
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since 10-29-2000
Posts 19275
Between the Lines


3 posted 05-08-2006 04:43 PM       View Profile for nakdthoughts   Email nakdthoughts   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for nakdthoughts

I enjoyed the words and rhythm...

M
Enchantress
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since 08-14-2001
Posts 37801
Somewhere in time~


4 posted 05-08-2006 05:00 PM       View Profile for Enchantress   Email Enchantress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Enchantress

Much enjoyed your first post.
Welcome to Passions.
I look forward to reading more of your work.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy

~ Trace my body with your words,
  in doing so, you touch my heart ~

Midnitesun
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Gaia


5 posted 05-08-2006 05:29 PM       View Profile for Midnitesun   Email Midnitesun   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Midnitesun

lol
don't care much
for hip hop or rap
this ain't no beginning
it's a wrap!
welcome to Passions
where yes indeedy, newbie sweetie
that redline marker sometimes will rear
it's censorship head,
and sometimes, it instills fear

but more often than not
it is justified right
in order to keep these boards
readable by a wide multitude

~an enjoyable read~
Goldenrose
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6 posted 05-08-2006 05:43 PM       View Profile for Goldenrose   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Goldenrose

A good start..censorship can happen at times...but a good poet can skillfully get his/her message across almost without people knowing..you will see if you think about it..all words can be substituted...by ones perhaps seldom used now..welcome to PIP...a HIP HOP poet you may be..but do try other expression..you may have a flare for other styles..thank you for these words..


Goldenrose.

''As the deer pants for steams of water, so my soul pants for you O God''
Psalm 42:1

tracie66
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since 01-18-2000
Posts 4587
Victoria, Australia


7 posted 02-27-2007 05:11 AM       View Profile for tracie66   Email tracie66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tracie66's Home Page   View IP for tracie66

Enjoyed!
welcome to passions
~hugs~
Tracie

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe
                         W. E. Channing


LeeJ
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since 06-19-2003
Posts 13093
SE PA


8 posted 02-27-2007 02:40 PM       View Profile for LeeJ   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LeeJ

Words hold the complexties of genetics
Deciphered with the theories of aesthetics
Takes time to understand like hieroglyphics
Secret police issue me Pyro~tickets
AMAZING SOUND....YOUR on a roll
profoundly captivating...
welcome to the blue pages...write on!!!!
 
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