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Open Poetry #37

Nature's Heart.

Goldenrose
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since 2003-05-30

Posts 3665

0 posted 2006-05-08 03:00 PM

Nature's heart beats again,
racing faster each day.
Birds singing a soft refrain,
on branches swinging sway.

Pulsating, quickening winds, warming,
lapping, glittering waves plash.
Clouds wandering, ever meandering,
stars deep midnight flash.

''As the deer pants for steams of water, so my soul pants for you O God''
Psalm 42:1

Devious Intellectual
Member

since 2006-05-08

Posts 112

1 posted 2006-05-08 03:22 PM

sounds very nice, another stanza and it woulda been better

exhale
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since 2003-06-13

Posts 646
Alberta,Canada

2 posted 2006-05-08 03:32 PM

I loved the flow in this, the wording was just wonderful, I actually felt myself moving with it.
Beautiful.

Goldenrose
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since 2003-05-30

Posts 3665

3 posted 2006-05-08 03:44 PM

Devious int..thank you for your reply...i thought about another stanza..then rejected it out of hand..sometimes a little is enough...
Once again i thank you for reading..

Goldenrose.

''As the deer pants for steams of water, so my soul pants for you O God''
Psalm 42:1

Goldenrose
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since 2003-05-30

Posts 3665

4 posted 2006-05-08 03:50 PM

Exhale ..thank you very much for your words.. i am pleased that i could take you along with me...in my opinion that is the best part of a human... having an imagination..the places we can go with it...the sensations we can ''feel'' with it..
Once again i thank you for your kind words..

Goldenrose.

''As the deer pants for steams of water, so my soul pants for you O God''
Psalm 42:1

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