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Bodger
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Tolerance for a short time

0 posted 2006-05-08 01:43 PM



Echoing Mirrors


Echoing mirrors on a reflection of torn thoughts that in spring danced in buds to steal hearts
We danced in spring tilting hair to delights in grass
Becaming an image that danced as we thought of flowering next year
In winter warmth as the caress of the high trees touched the bark in the winds
And we made ideas as gentle and empty as thoughts watching bright fires fallen to lost images
Sparkling in the fire we feel to know
As dawn rises to in summer heat moving winter cold to spring ideal

Dave

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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
1 posted 2006-05-08 04:33 PM


very beautiful thoughts, Dave

M

Bodger
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Tolerance for a short time
2 posted 2006-05-08 05:06 PM


Thanks M

Dave

Liz Sinclair
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Atlantis
3 posted 2006-05-09 11:50 PM


This actually reads great outloud.  It's like an allegiance to thought.  I liked this.  Thanks for sharing.

Liz...Carpe Diem

Bodger
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Tolerance for a short time
4 posted 2006-05-10 02:49 AM


I wish I could Barnes out loud

I live and thing of every moment as it took so much and so many false trails and ideas, but so long I could only hold it in my hands

And read as if from a script

Dave

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