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Unequilibrium
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Unequilibrium |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida 
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I considered that I needed to write something on this paper that blankly accuses. I know I should probably try to put into words the way the world seems to betray or the fact that I expect less than yesterday. Yet I shrug with imposed indifference, rhetorically asking myself why I expected more when everything seems nothing short of mostly confused. Trust in ones self or anything else feels horribly abused. Relished songs of dire times and forsaken love wrapped in bitter words of never again and lessons learnt. I think too much. Just seems like a lot goes on below the surface of what I thought was crystal clear. Buoyant enough to keep from treading eventually sinking in the fear. I gave birth to terror in the night. I replay conversation of faint lyrical mumblings trying to get the words right Yet I wonder of it all and where everything might be. Where might I fall in the ambiguity. Knowing a lacking of all things secreting secure In this, a world of madness, I’m left feeling a bit in the obscure. "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
it gets harder to stay afloat some days..dont know if its the age im at..or the time of year, state of the world i understand tho cyberhugs offered M |
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wandering glider Senior Member
since 2001-04-04
Posts 501aloft |
I alight at the same keyboard touching on such despair then try to rise again into a clearer breath of air glider |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
I think it's maturity, a reality, wisdom and the feeling of responsibility weighing very heavily on one's shoulders, a sense of understanding (a certain slant of) reality. That sudden fear in the night that one isn't managing the way one wants to, nor coping with as many problems as fast as one wants to and that one should be doing better - and the desire to fix everything instantaneously! I think the answer is to drink tranquility, to have faith, and to rely on the support of those around us sometimes and to bask in their friendship and love, and to take each moment and absorb its peace and beauty and promise. Hugs - Owl |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
I have a wonderful Powerpoint slideshow that Enchantress sent to me (so recently that I haven't thanked her for it yet!), and I thought it would make you feel better, but I see that you don't have an email address entered in Pip. If you have one and would like the slideshow, please either email me or Enchantress for it. - Owl |
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JesusChristPose Senior Member
since 2005-06-21
Posts 777Pittsburgh, Pa |
Susan, There is much written that I could relate to at one time. Well expressed and written too.  Enjoyed!"Melvin, the best thing you got going for you is your willingness to humiliate yourself." |
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juj1 Junior Member
since 2006-05-08
Posts 22Laval Quebec Ca |
JesusChristPose has stolen my words. Great read. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Relished songs of dire times and forsaken love wrapped in bitter words of never again and lessons learnt. I think too much. Just seems like a lot goes on below the surface of what I thought was crystal clear. Buoyant enough to keep from treading eventually sinking in the fear ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ That verse really did it for me! It is that truth that sets us free, no matter how much it hurts. I do believe you speak for so many, Susan. Nothing like good and honest poetry at it's very best!! *applause* |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
I almost said "join the crowd," Susan, but I won't....suffice to say, I know what you mean. *hugs*....jo |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
"Just seems like a lot goes on below the surface of what I thought was crystal clear." Always is that way kiddo. I hope you feel better. *hug* |
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shades of paul Member
since 2005-12-14
Posts 370In Reality |
Another good one Susan. paul shades of peace,love,and happiness to you |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
i think nearly all of us can relate to your words one way or another.... wonderfully expressed Susan... miss ya m how i would love you, love you as no one ever did! Die and still, love you more. And still love you more..and more |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
"Where might I fall in the ambiguity." yep...not the most secure spot |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
ditto the helpless thinking too much...and wonderful to read you again!! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Bodger Senior Member
since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260Tolerance for a short time |
I always enjoy your words Such clarity, feeling, observation, understanding within and without Dave |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
 thank you everyone! "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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stevebrklynnyc Member
since 2004-01-04
Posts 292GA, Camden |
Very sincere poem, would like to talk for the hell of it as former friends, email at xmobhitman67@hotmail.com No strings and no problems, just want to say hey to someone from the past that I am sorry for not living up to what I should have been. Steve. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I can relate to this just helps sometimes knowing you're not alone |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
for someone having difficulty writing, I gots news for ya... You did great!! |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Thank you all once again! "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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Fabiani Member
since 2006-05-12
Posts 123Mesa, Az |
i like this poem alot it speaks about what i feel it was very well expressed and is a beatiful poem |
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