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ecrivan
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since 2001-12-10
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my own state

0 posted 2006-05-07 06:59 PM


trudge into the bar
ask for a drink
share a look
disappear
back the next day
transformed
holding another look
ask for another round
loiter near the door
disappear
another face
another file
one day and the next
characters unfold
another drink
swipe of an empty glass
pants wet with stains
disappear just the same
hundreds and thousands
gaunt faces
sharky
estranged profiles
weird smiles
all gone
terminated

© Copyright 2006 Martin Dansky - All Rights Reserved
Katerie
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since 2006-01-27
Posts 92
Central New York
1 posted 2006-05-07 08:27 PM


Simple.  Amazing.  Simply amazing.

I love your style, and it's different than most.  

ecrivan
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since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923
my own state
2 posted 2006-05-08 11:48 AM


consider that a complement, thanks


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