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ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

0 posted 2006-05-06 10:50 PM



Giving Form

So many times
I have watched you walk away
Feeling earth’s very core abandon gravity

Trickling the sensation of loss
Merely profound the intensity of hope
Searing my ego to its proper place away

I have known your fear
Without a doubt, the mask I wear myself
Deluge in the solitary times conceal

Lengthening my legs
Insistent and resistant to rejections whip
Yet I myself have not remained unscathed

Seeding pearls upon my tongue
Hoping for the words to touch you
Pressed against your side in every thought

Weary of a long and lonely wish
Holding on to reasons I remain but yours
Overflowing the restraint in attempted strength

Though all I have ever wanted
This love that presses urgently to bud
My gift, yet poised and rapt extends my arms

And looking up at you, overcome
Of a treasure fit to hold your heart
Should you receive me into spring, with honor

Copyright Kkh 5/6/06

[This message has been edited by ThisDiamond (05-07-2006 08:52 AM).]

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The Lady
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634
The Southwest
1 posted 2006-05-07 01:10 AM



"Seeding pearls upon my tongue
Hoping for the words to touch you
Pressed against your side in every thought"

I feel desolation here TD. Beautifully written.


StevenS
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since 2005-09-21
Posts 945
L. A. (Lower Alabama)
2 posted 2006-05-08 07:41 AM


Lovely! :-)
LeeJ
Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

3 posted 2006-05-08 07:44 AM


very sad, that we humans, become more secluded with each and every mean act or words from others....so that when something good comes along, we are afraid to trust the motives...

beautiful poem

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