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blitz
Junior Member
since 2006-04-26
Posts 19


0 posted 2006-05-06 01:08 PM


one heart
one mind
its all i ask
to be happy
all i want to be free..
stay close to your heart
and never leave
for one day
you will see
i am still here.
a life you think is gone
has only begun..
for in you
i left a piece of me
and no matter what happens to me..
i will forever live
with you my dear
my love
my friend
my only family
don't make me cry
don't make me sad
don't wipe away the tears
let me see
let me know your hearts feelings
and i will know
i am truly in your heart always


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ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353
Michigan, USA
1 posted 2006-05-06 01:37 PM


Welcome Back.
Full of emotion.  Enjoyed your write.
TD

byski
Member
since 2006-01-26
Posts 235
Alberta, Canada
2 posted 2006-05-06 01:46 PM


Very nice. You touched on a strong theme in my life right now. It's nice to know that no matter where we are in this world we all can be found in the hearts of those that love us.
The Lady
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634
The Southwest
3 posted 2006-05-07 04:02 PM




Heartfelt work.

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