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Open Poetry #37
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shmity72
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since 2006-04-29
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wa usa
0 posted 2006-05-05 07:35 AM


this may rub you the wrong way do not read if you are easily offended.

Grabbing and biting,
Gnashing and slashing,
Sulfatious supping,
And stairways smashing,

Loveless songbirds,
Freeways breathing,
Quiet death,
In the midday sun.

4 11 93
all comments welcome.

slaves 'oft love their masters.

GBS
© Copyright 2006 Jason D. Smith - All Rights Reserved
passing shadows
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1 posted 2006-05-05 01:49 PM

maybe I didn't get it but this didn't offend me at all

would love to see what everyone else thinks though
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