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KateForFreeMinds
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since 2006-05-02
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0 posted 2006-05-02 01:32 AM


i'm weight on your shoulders, i'm smooth against your skin
i'm down for this love/hate relationship to begin, so count me in
touch my hair and run your finger across my lips
these bedroom crimes go straight to my hips
i can think of fifty ways to make you mine
but with the slip of this dress, i'll only need one tonight

you know that you could never make me happy
i may be easily amused, but i'm not very easy to please
tell me that lies sound even better when you're on your knees

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passing shadows
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1 posted 2006-05-02 01:58 AM


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that ending is really neat...I like it

The Lady
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2 posted 2006-05-02 04:27 PM




I'm with passing shadows. The ending is great.

Welcome!

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