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Ericc
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since 2003-01-31
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0 posted 2006-05-01 07:20 PM



And we never left the
Garden.

Falling only in our
thoughts of
distance.

Until again our fingers meet...and
we taste the fruits of
Eden.

Remembering...we never
left at all.


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Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
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Canada eh.
1 posted 2006-05-01 07:39 PM


"Remembering...we never
left at all."

How true Eric...and how very beautiful!
Hugs~Nancy

~ Trace my body with your words,
  in doing so, you touch my heart ~

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
2 posted 2006-05-01 07:42 PM


makes me miss someone...
beautiful write

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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Eternity
3 posted 2006-05-14 10:32 AM


As beautiful as ever ... the memory, the awareness, your words, a never ending revival and renewal of love's gifts.

I love you.
Margherita

Martie
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4 posted 2006-05-14 11:32 AM


Eric

"Remembering...we never
left at all."

Always such purity in your poetry. It's good to read you again.

OwlSA
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since 2005-11-07
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Durban, South Africa
5 posted 2006-05-14 01:35 PM


Oh, my!  This is garden beautiful.  I don't want to leave your poem.

- Owl

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