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Open Poetry #37
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Dominique-Simone
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since 2005-11-12
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0 posted 2006-04-30 11:03 PM



Melted like fine chocolate
we mold ourselves
in actions
you’re a strange recipe
exotic
taking me in, softly
with sensual smells
musk and rose
a strange cocktail
balanced on passion
captured in the linens
and beneath the folds of our clothes
hair flowing tickles
milky skin
as wide eyes take in
every
single
moment
you’re a strange recipe

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The Lady
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
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1 posted 2006-04-30 11:13 PM




"you’re a strange recipe
exotic
taking me in, softly
with sensual smells
musk and rose
a strange cocktail
balanced on passion
captured in the linens
and beneath the folds of our clothes"

Now this... this is... well, sensual is the word Page. I love it.

Dominique-Simone
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since 2005-11-12
Posts 643

2 posted 2006-04-30 11:16 PM


Thank You again lady. You never let me down!
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