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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2006-04-30 09:57 PM



Remembering Bo Jangle


"I always liked her alot,
and she liked me too, I thought."

Yes, this Bo was a girl,
and everytime she danced for me,
my heart danced round the world.

My house fell in love with her,
as she tended it with care,
and I was in love with her too,
and thought it to be love we shared.


JamesLee
April30
2006



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The Lady
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1 posted 2006-04-30 10:14 PM




"and everytime she danced for me,
my heart danced round the world."

Oh James. Is she gone? It's a sadly beautiful poem.

OwlSA
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2 posted 2006-05-01 03:46 AM


I'm sorry to hear your pain, but it has created a beautiful poem.

- Owl

BROTHER JOHN
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3 posted 2006-05-01 04:12 AM


James,

She still dances!


Debo
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4 posted 2006-05-01 04:15 AM


It's hard to move on when all this pain is still dancing around in your heart. I hope you get another Bo to dance a love tune with you.

Debo

passing shadows
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5 posted 2006-05-01 05:44 PM


sad write James
Mr»ÄlleÿÇät
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6 posted 2006-05-01 07:19 PM


Hmmm
Can one clap and cry at the same time?

That's it, I've had a clapping cry experience.

Bodger
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7 posted 2006-05-01 07:32 PM


James it sounds like it was the house you both liked and worshipped

Perhaps

One or the other

Was mistaken

I always enjoy your James although some I do at times prefer to "put away for the future"

Dave

Enchantress
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8 posted 2006-05-01 07:41 PM


A most excellent bittersweet write James.
Hugs~Nancy

~ Trace my body with your words,
  in doing so, you touch my heart ~

JamesMichael
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9 posted 2006-05-03 08:20 PM


Thank you The Lady, OwlSa. BROTHER JOHN, Debo, passing shadows, Mr. Alley Cat, Bodger and Enchantress for the wonderful responses...
The answer to all the questions and statements is...yes...James

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