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BROTHER JOHN
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0 posted 2006-04-30 07:35 PM



I invite your corrections.


THE SCAFFOLDING

The foundation laid and the building rose
From Mother Earth. As it grew higher still,
The scaffolding climbed higher with great skill
With guarding grilles and gargoyles in proud pose!

This scaffolding won fame as dull eyes froze
On its tall towering height.  The world's nil
Massed, spellbound by the temporary, till
Some "dead" drooled; some swooned, some discarded  clothes!

This scaffolding gained glowing global fame
And stretched its shallow shades to yo-yo's ward,
As the new building bowed its head in shame!

Dismantling drew nigh with beams and each board
Piled high.  The building torn down with acclaim,
But the ole scaffolding: ... the fools' reward!!





[This message has been edited by BROTHER JOHN (05-01-2006 03:50 AM).]

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