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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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Trim whisper to me before the dawn so I can wear your words all day just some words cut out |
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shirtless Member
since 2006-04-29
Posts 359 |
smooth and concise |
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howardtsu Senior Member
since 2006-01-29
Posts 678 |
shh...........let's not wake up the kids  good poem  |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
love it...so good to be reading you, Helen M |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Nicely done and the words fit you so well. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
nothing like a comfy warm suit to make you feel good all day long |
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