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Bodger Senior Member
since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260Tolerance for a short time |
Many the times I've wonder Of whatever mis-hew Many times I ponder Of images abused Many the times I looked at A shadow of the sun Drifting onto a quiet street But then I was very young Many times I look at ideas Buried by their knees As those you trust and thought off Had their own winds to breeze Many times I often wonder Many times I walk the miles Many times I face embarrasment Many times then I've cried But from the bottom of my soles and feet Comes a connection to my head And so to avoid defeat I often took to read Words can sometimes save you Sung in your own way Hidden from the raptures On rain on a Sunday's day Still I found a woman With one slight possibility Taken to remove my socks And a machine that's dance repeatly But as it travels on kitchen floor She uses Serendipity And thus laundry appears And my mind thinks Quite differently |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
these words pulled me in to a kind of "drift-off" I like it when a poem does that |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
..."Many times I look at ideas Buried by their knees"... In the overall, the world wears a shroud of decency... When lifting that skirt...sometimes there is a need for mud flaps! Many great lines, joined together in a stoic sort of dream. Liked this. TD |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Wonderfully expreseed , Many times I wonder and ponder too Hope |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Words can sometimes save you Sung in your own way so true...I love how you put this.. and I did smile at the end picturing your words. M |
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Bodger Senior Member
since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260Tolerance for a short time |
I write a load of nonsense most times but sometimes some sense creeps in Dave |
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