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THE INFLUENCE OF LEONARD COHEN
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THE INFLUENCE OF LEONARD COHEN |
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shirtless Member
since 2006-04-29
Posts 359
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THE INFLUENCE OF LEONARD COHEN since you left: I’ve committed half a suicide I’ve tortured an ocean I’ve perfected my limp I’ve said two prayers: I prayed that you’d come back to me I prayed that you wouldn’t already, one of my prayers has been answered |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Wow shirtless! Nice work. That last line smacked me hard. Welcome! |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
wait awhile and listen to the wind and you will find in answered prayers that whispers cling there |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Wow, shirtless! I agree with Kate (The Lady), that last line smacks hard. Ouch! Sorry to keep harping on the excellent structure of your poetry, but that also strikes me full in the face, with each of your poems that I read. A dynamite gem! - Owl |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
And 1slick_lady, I love your reply too! Beautiful! - Owl |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Very impressive work. The subtle nature, I find intriguing.. "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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