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blitz
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since 2006-04-26
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0 posted 2006-04-29 11:01 PM



i hold you close
i see your tears
i smile softly
i raise my hand to your cheek
i gently place it along it
i gently bring your face close to mine as
i lean toward you
i gently press my lips to yours
i watch as you close your eyes
i can see a faint smile on your face
i slip some tongue hoping you didn't notice or didn't care
i kiss for a minute longer then pull back
i look into your eyes as they plead for more
i just smile softly and you lay you head on my chest
i gently wrap my arms around you, holding you close
i feel your tears as they fall to my shirt
i know your happy
I know your love is with me
I feel as though my heart is soring high above the earth
I feel my love jump at you
I look up at the night sky
I see the stars come out
I cant help but smile
I looks back at you, and you look up at me
I smile so softly you lean up to me for another kiss
I bend down slowly and gently press my lips to yours
I pull away and turn your eyes filled with tears
I look down, you turn me around
I look at you your eyes so soft and filled with sorrow
I kiss your forehead
I can feel your joy
I can see your happiness because
I haven't left
I wrap my arms around you and hold you tight
I never want to let go not during this night
I know with you i am happy
I know you are happy with me
I run my hand through your hair
I gently let you go
I smile and hope this night would never end....
I am happy and yet
I know it must

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ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353
Michigan, USA
1 posted 2006-04-30 12:15 PM


A beautiful scenario...when the night ends, there is the dawn to anticipate.  
You write the push pull of love well, an emotionally full relationship.
TD

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