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Open Poetry #37

House of Pain

SilentShadow
Junior Member

since 2006-04-20

Posts 32
Fl. U.S.A.

0 posted 2006-04-29 01:41 PM

Ne'er did I feel so manley,
As when You were in my arms
Like a piece of red hot candy,
But one of your fatal charms
Dreams I had a plenty,
Safe from all that harms
and though my house was burning,
I was deaf to all alarms

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2006-04-29 01:43 PM

outstanding! Bravo!

jennifer101
New Member

since 2006-04-29

Posts 8
texas usa

2 posted 2006-04-29 09:48 PM

i like all types of poems big or small happy or sad but yours in this short form has opened my eyes in a big way tthanks for being a poet

Debo
Member

since 2006-04-18

Posts 321
Texas U.S.A.

3 posted 2006-04-29 10:26 PM

Yeah sometimes we refuse to see until our hearts break. And then time moves us on to the next heart ache.
I really enjoyed this poem

Debo

SilentShadow
Junior Member

since 2006-04-20

Posts 32
Fl. U.S.A.

4 posted 2006-05-01 09:38 PM

TY very much for your words of appreciation, and recognition, it is gratifying to know that someone can understands the place this comes from, and to know that we are not alone

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

5 posted 2006-05-02 04:34 PM

"and though my house was burning,
I was deaf to all alarms"

Ahhh SilentShadow. Love makes us blind and deaf. I really enjoyed this poem.

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