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Dominique-Simone
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0 posted 2006-04-27 12:09 PM



gloved
with a French accent
and a Creole dialect
she sings
softly
to herself
hunched over
hands covered slickly
she scrubs the floors
as god parts her lips
in soulful words
the past reflects in her eyes
shining out
revealing the troubles
she once had
now
gloved
she scrubs the floors
free
and without hunger

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The Lady
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The Southwest
1 posted 2006-04-27 12:17 PM




A beautiful portrait Page. Well done!


Enchantress
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Canada eh.
2 posted 2006-04-27 09:17 AM


Wonderful imagery..enjoyed the read.
Hugs~Nancy

~ Trace my body with your words,
  in doing so, you touch my heart ~

passing shadows
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displaced
3 posted 2006-04-27 09:27 AM


very touching
Dominique-Simone
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4 posted 2006-04-27 10:49 AM


Thank you all...
EagleScorpion
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5 posted 2006-04-29 12:43 PM


WoW!!!!

now THIS is good

Dominique-Simone
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6 posted 2006-04-29 05:52 PM


thank you so much Eagle. I enjoyed writing this.
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