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Goldenrose
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0 posted 2006-04-25 05:30 PM



Draw back the
curtain of night.
Wonders of nature
passing slowly into
a sky, an
orb of light,
rising, pulling, lulling
us to the
stirring dreamlands horizon.
Gothic ruins lit
by ghostly glow.
Breeze softly tingling
on faces, sending
us spinning through
time and space.
Dark pools hidden
behind sleeping eyes.
Hearts beating in
time with Earth's
perpetual motion orbit.

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passing shadows
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1 posted 2006-04-26 06:26 AM


I do wish I could feel nature like you do, enough to be able to put it in words like this

this is gorgeous

love the new pic of you too

Goldenrose
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2 posted 2006-04-26 07:04 AM


Dixie i am sure you could better than i could at writing about nature...the talent is there..go for it..thank you for your kind comments..

Goldenrose.

''As the deer pants for steams of water, so my soul pants for you O God''
Psalm 42:1

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
3 posted 2006-04-28 08:36 AM


"Draw back the
curtain of night."

~ And the pictures your pen/brush painted were magical!

The tone and the mood of your words were lulling, soothing, and comforting.

You not only present Nature ~ you glorify Her!

Marge would love this poem ~ almost as much as I do! Moon 2

Love & Lunar Magic,
Linda
Moon

StevenS
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4 posted 2006-04-28 10:08 AM


Enjoyed Goldenrose, I agree with EA it is soothing and comforting. :-)
BROTHER JOHN
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5 posted 2006-04-28 10:51 AM


Dear Goldenrose,

The night's sky,too, allures me with its mystic sway.  Maybe the why is our home!


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