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Dancing in Sun Rise -This really is a long draft from 2004-05
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Dancing in Sun Rise -This really is a long draft from 2004-05 |
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Bodger Senior Member
since 2005-06-12
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This came from 2004/2005 as I start to look at some stuff coming together. A lot of what I write are ideas and the ideas get shuffled together to be developed Long I know and worth showing hopefully Dave Dancing in Our Sun Rise People moved as we circled intent on a dance Eyes liked crescents daring an advance Showing all we held in reserve on a judgment day Moving like two skunks as everyone moved away Dancing on a rhythm breakfasting on meat Movement getting closer whispers in the heat Fog within our feet light within our eyes Dancing in our veins And then we found sunrise Earth immortal Senses Strummed White hot vapour In a caven Foaming flowing beyond sight Reaching deep amongst the tatters of my sinews breathing air pumping adrenaline I breathe heavily deeply within myself Determined I control treating each new challenge intruding on my natural being And in the ogres of our souls We destroy ourselves To destroy others And Chaos reigns In a mass of freedom I echoed boundary Hemming myself in with vision In ignorance I had no boundaries Only the chance to go forward Now I have learnt I have only boundaries To stop me As darkness ruined a dark lit night glistening on heat burning watching crescent heated red hot light grappling to melt ore in false images for punters paying for sharades of prefabrication painted in safety approved steps to falsehood in body we saw in a molten fire the broken paths of that would not allow our joining as we failed to learn and thus entrapped in atrophy we burnt in a fire of knowledge Flying those wings to wing over flights of fancy glinting proud heads with brain muscles powering images of potency imprinting life of life Faint ideas fainting in the mind of dreams you fainted behind flying onto ideas that would change the world echoing dreams of flight To echo thoughts of thoughts Hovering in mid-thought you hover over decisions indecision in the challenge to challenge to challenge supported by many you dream of flying alone In a moment’s boundary I threw myself across the sand in dreams of thoughts as long boats drift across the early tide Brown stretched against a log fiery rim casting sweet colours on a blue crystal water almost transparent in the wake of boats We watched and enjoyed the silouhete into the sun with the darkness of failing shadows darkness ruined a dark lit night glistening on heat burning watching crescent heated red hot light grappling to melt ore in false images of sharades of prefabrication painted in safety approved steps of thought to falsehood In bodies we saw in a molten fire the broken paths that would not allow our joining as we failed to learn and thus entrapped in atrophy we burnt in a fire of knowledge In a mass of freedom I echoed boundary hemming myself in with vision Why should I be so cursed In ignorance I had no boundaries only the chance to go forward Now I have learnt I have only boundaries to stop me Note from me There is a repeat here It is deliberate but maybe needs looking at |
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