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Pilgrimage
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0 posted 2006-04-25 11:53 AM



Hibiscus blossom
soft and white behind my ear
listen to my heart

When he strokes your cool petals
When his breath touches your flesh

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

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Susan Caldwell
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1 posted 2006-04-25 12:20 PM


It's soft and beautiful Nan.

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

Kethry
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since 2000-07-29
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2 posted 2006-04-29 07:11 PM


Nan,
Are you thinking of holidays? There were hints of Hawaii in this. So lovely, so very soft and lovely.

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



passing shadows
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3 posted 2006-04-29 07:30 PM


beautiful one
Pilgrimage
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4 posted 2006-05-01 10:03 AM


Thanks guys.  I wrote it thinking of Hawaii.  I wish I could go back, everything is covered in flowers.  

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

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