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mariae
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since 2006-04-24
Posts 54
Denmark, Europe

0 posted 2006-04-25 05:13 AM



You get older

every day
every month
every year

You get wiser

every smile
every laugh
every tear

© Copyright 2006 M.Elmbaek - All Rights Reserved
poettothecars
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since 2006-02-10
Posts 1093
New Zealand
1 posted 2006-04-25 06:38 AM


and every word is ever the same
going in circles getting nowhere

a poet who cares

JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
2 posted 2006-04-26 07:34 PM


Nice...James
Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
3 posted 2006-04-26 09:02 PM


mariae
Enjoyed the read.

WindWalker
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since 2001-10-12
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4 posted 2006-04-26 09:57 PM


This was a very good read; I enjoyed it.
StevenS
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since 2005-09-21
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L. A. (Lower Alabama)
5 posted 2006-04-26 10:26 PM


Enjoyed Mariae! :-)
miabug
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since 2006-04-19
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Canada
6 posted 2006-04-27 11:08 PM


Good one... says a lot with a few words. Love it

Mia

Rainclouds lie in your tears, sunshine in your heart. When you cry from happiness, you glow as a rainbow. - Marie-Ève C.

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
7 posted 2006-04-28 12:09 PM


Maria, I'm smiling... I think you just made me wiser!

Warm hug 'n smile,
EA
Flowers

sweetberry
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since 2006-03-29
Posts 125

8 posted 2006-04-29 01:05 AM


Short and to the point...I enjoyed it!
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