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mariae
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since 2006-04-24
Posts 54
Denmark, Europe

0 posted 2006-04-24 01:21 PM



Maybe life is not what you hoped,
and maybe you think it's too late
To do what you and smile every day so you just sit there and wait

You are waiting for something to happen,
for something to come or to be
But life is what you do with it
If you could only see

Open your eyes, work for your dream
don't give up like the rest
You only get one chance in living
so you better make the best

© Copyright 2006 M.Elmbaek - All Rights Reserved
miabug
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since 2006-04-19
Posts 59
Canada
1 posted 2006-04-24 01:22 PM


Excellent message in a beautiful write...
I enjoyed it very much.
Thanks for sharing

Mia

Rainclouds lie in your tears, sunshine in your heart. When you cry from happiness, you glow as a rainbow. - Marie-Ève C.

mariae
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since 2006-04-24
Posts 54
Denmark, Europe
2 posted 2006-04-24 02:53 PM


Mia
Thank you...
I hope my spelling isn't too bad. English can be hard language. Some times I forget how simple words are spelled :-)

Klassy Lassy
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since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187
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3 posted 2006-04-24 02:58 PM


I enjoyed your poem very much!  Welcome to the site.  

Before you submit your poems, you can add them to your library for later reference by clicking the box where options are listed. It is easier to locate later.


~ Klassy

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
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Realms of Light
4 posted 2006-04-24 03:09 PM


Hi, mariae! Welcome to Passions! I loved the spirit and the message of your debuting poem!

~ and might I add, you did one heck of a better job of writing it in English that I could have done in Danish! Flirty

Giving you a warm, welcoming hug and smiles from across the miles,
Earth Angel
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Gaia
5 posted 2006-04-24 07:39 PM


celebrating a new poet joining the family

Welcome! I hope you enjoy all the variety here!

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