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howardtsu
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since 2006-01-29
Posts 678


0 posted 2006-04-23 04:10 PM



              is there a Knoxville in Texas?

                  if i bought me a Lexus,

could i pick you up and drive us to the nexus

                 of our relationship level

                   or do i need a shovel

to dig myself out of the hole i'm in

that's why i use the art of rhyming

     to create the perfect timing

it takes to get your heart chiming

                   loud enough

to wake me up to the fact that even though we're going through a rough

                       stretch

it's still possible for us to sketch

                 a happy picture



                                               love,

                                               howard



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backtash123
Junior Member
since 2006-04-22
Posts 46

1 posted 2006-04-25 11:13 AM


This poem was irregular, but creative.
backtash123
Junior Member
since 2006-04-22
Posts 46

2 posted 2006-04-25 11:13 AM


This poem was irregular but creative
Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
3 posted 2006-04-25 11:17 AM


"that's why i use the art of rhyming

     to create the perfect timing"

~ and as they say, "Timing is everything!"

You've been gone awhile! I guess you've been driving around Texas in a Lexus! Flirty

Loves 'n Laughs,
EA

Pilgrimage
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since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945
Texas, USA
4 posted 2006-04-25 12:30 PM


Except the shovel just digs the hole deeper.  I enjoyed this one.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

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