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Bodger
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since 2005-06-12
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Tolerance for a short time

0 posted 2006-04-23 01:14 PM


Off the fly posted elsewhere

Dave
    
Has to be the biggest Banker's ever day

Got a HFO from Venus

Seems to offer quotes on bonds
You would never believe

All the income refuged to
Elbelieve

Got this deal on old docks
Take Starships in their stride

Problem with safety
Metal has some pride

Got this deal on Earth
Kept the San out of feeling

So long so there at times
I often came out reeling

Got this deal with Blair Co
Energy from Bushes

Got this deal on the world
And no teeth on my bristles

I write this stuff and then I come back and read it

What is in my head
Seems somehow to read it

Instellar banker
With a memory of his
Esteem

Seems to still be going
On a head of stream

Remembering where he has "passed before"

Makes him favour a planet

and unfortunately

what he was before

© Copyright 2006 Dave Page - Cirencester UK - All Rights Reserved
backtash123
Junior Member
since 2006-04-22
Posts 46

1 posted 2006-04-25 11:16 AM


The poem has excellent introspection
Bodger
Senior Member
since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260
Tolerance for a short time
2 posted 2006-04-25 01:50 PM


I dont think it was introspection

It was more the second hand car salesman light years in the future

Dave

The Lady
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634
The Southwest
3 posted 2006-04-27 02:21 PM




"Got this deal on the world
And no teeth on my bristles"

Good stuff second hand car salesman.

Bodger
Senior Member
since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260
Tolerance for a short time
4 posted 2006-04-28 04:10 PM


Thanks Lady

Any time you want a clean, clean, and we clean

On your car

Just dial with the format

Universe:politcal organisation(we do of course record calls for training purposes):Planet of desire(assuming this is the right planet for you - we have deas if this is not the planet for you); Car Surfing habits and accredited moves with of course an accredited partner and the mandatory safety requirements)  We dont like danger to interfere as you may injure others.

Apart from we wish you a happy lift-off, safe flying and just we may we say

Thank you for using second-hand space wagons

Dave

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