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Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
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0 posted 2006-04-23 12:39 PM


And so it will be; the naïve must believe
because they want to I guess and suppose
that an emotional feel is the truth
but it really belongs in a bucket
of useless dreams and beliefs.

I’ve always thought like attracts like
in a dreamer’s unseen universe
but now I know it’s only a wish
to see good where evil exists
that breeds and feeds into reality
the hope and needs of lovers like me.    

Once, twice, and a million times
the absorption of this energy
brings the dream of fulfilling love’s need
to the forefront of everyday life  
until a silent explosion  
finds me on my hands and knees    
picking up and putting the pieces  
into a bucket of useless dreams.    

Don’t lean on the bucket, dear,
don’t lean on it at all
because then my dream will land on the floor
and stick to my feet evermore.

“Oops!”

Helen / 23 April 2006


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passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
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displaced
1 posted 2006-04-23 03:13 PM


wow Helen I can sure relate...I have a few on my feet too
Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
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2 posted 2006-04-23 03:20 PM


Yeah - there's always somebody knocking over a bucket somewhere in this big wide world.  Thanks, Dixie.
StevenS
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since 2005-09-21
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3 posted 2006-04-23 03:35 PM


My bucket has holes in it Honeybunch but I always seem to have a few pieces to big to fall out. Enjoyed! :-)
Honeybunch
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4 posted 2006-04-23 03:46 PM


Hi, Steven.  Hmm? If nothing falls out the bucket then it means (according to my write) that they remain useless and I know that's not what you mean.  The trick is to keep them away from the bucket so that they have some force and effect in our lives and don't weigh our feet down.
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