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ice
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0 posted 2006-04-23 08:33 AM


­I saw an old friend,
After many years;
The scene looked like
It was set in summer,
Before his personal sun burned out.

No! By looking close, I knew
That it was April,
Magnolia blooms
Were background decorations
On what seemed a rainy day,

On finer study, saw the grey
Was shock by re cognition caused.
Not passing clouds aplay at games;
It was the fall of pent emotions,
Held inside for years retained
That dulled the pictures gloss;

The drops that smeared the paper,
Was the fall of several tears.

His smiling image, was repasted
On my deep remembrance places,
And my heart sang fondness songs
To my dead friend, that lives in folds
Between the albums open covers.
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© Copyright 2006 ford hume - All Rights Reserved
backtash123
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1 posted 2006-04-23 08:36 AM


This poem was pleasant to read, as it made me remember meetings with relatives.
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2 posted 2006-04-23 08:36 AM


What a sad poem.  I am so sorry for your loss of your friend.  You express yourself well and even well enough to touch the readers' heart.  I hope you are able to heal and one day remember the good times, rejoicing in the life s/he had and that you can find another friend to fill your void.  May God bless you.

Sheri Adams

Jesus lives in my heart!  He can in yours too!!!
Sheri Liegh Adams
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ice
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3 posted 2006-04-23 08:49 AM


Backtash and Musicmaker
Thank you for reading and your replies...

My friend has been dead for ten years now, I have not thought of him for a long time, and the picture in the album reminded me of the loss.

A person cries to purge the grief,
A wonderful vent we humans have...
Tears are balm that help heal loss.

---------ice
   ><>

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4 posted 2006-04-23 10:00 AM



Lays close to the heart,
this does...

I recently received photos
of close family members
photos I had never seen before,
only to be reminded
that our resemblance
is shared in eye-mirrors...

and in this way,
our love comes home again.

Finding a poem from you
on any given day
are priceless treasures.

Thank you.

passing shadows
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5 posted 2006-04-23 03:20 PM


I understand so deeply
Martie
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6 posted 2006-04-23 03:28 PM


Ford...Photographs are so often the only tangible thing left of those who have passed on.  I have many that are dear to me and over which I shed a tear now and then.  
Honeybunch
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7 posted 2006-04-23 03:51 PM


And when we open the albums the years just fall away and it all seems like yesterday.  A lovely write and when I'm strong I may brave my albums again.  
Enchantress
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8 posted 2006-04-23 04:51 PM


Oh my, I felt this deep in my soul..
Old photographs..old friends, relatives..
at times the memories flood back
with just the glimpse of a picture.
Thank you Ford..
I need to 'look up' some friends, and memories.
Hugs~Nancy

~ Trace my body with your words,
  in doing so, you touch my heart ~

froggy
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9 posted 2006-04-24 03:06 PM


Ford,
  A beautiful but sad read.
I send you hugs.

:-)

Until he extends the circle of his compassion to all living things,
man will not himself find peace."

Albert Schweitzer,
Nobel Peace Prize Wi

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10 posted 2006-04-24 03:13 PM


Ford, for a moment, you breathed life back into your friend ~ and I was pleased to meet him.

A lovely, poignant write.

Love & Eternal Light,
Linda
Flowers

mariae
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11 posted 2006-04-25 07:49 AM


Another proof that we never really forget even if they seem unreachable :-)

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