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shades of paul
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0 posted 2006-04-22 05:47 PM


As sure as the Hard Rain Falls, I listened for years to your lyrical twists.
Magical Dylan words always giving me Shelter from the Storm.
Woven thru the musical notes, you Tangled me up in Blue.
Thoughts Blowin in the Wind, it made me think, if only I could do that.
Truly inspiring tapestry words of life, emotion, and Love Minus Zero.
I Don't Think Twice, and I knew it would be alright,
So with a Twist of Fate, now I play and sing them.
Yes, Things have Changed, While I was Watching the River Flow.
So before I go to Knocking on Heaven's Door,
and always being in pursuit of my poetry hobby,
would it be all right if I can call you Bobby ?

paul


shades of peace,love,and happiness to you

[This message has been edited by shades of paul (04-24-2006 07:42 AM).]

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Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
1 posted 2006-04-23 03:18 PM


shades of paul
Enjoyed the read.

shades of paul
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2 posted 2006-04-23 07:34 PM


Thanks Seymour, may you stay forever young........paul

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The Lady
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3 posted 2006-04-24 01:05 AM




Nice work, especially that last line. I think you know him well enough to call him Bobby.

"It doesn't matter inside the Gates of Eden"


shades of paul
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4 posted 2006-04-24 07:37 AM


Dear Lady, Thank you, you angel you, ...paul

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Debo
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5 posted 2006-04-29 02:23 AM


I loved the way you used the titles to his songs to write this wonderful poem...
Great,Great,Great...

Debo

HopeS
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6 posted 2006-04-29 06:06 AM


Fabulous !! he has always been a favourite of mine

Hope

shmity72
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7 posted 2006-04-29 06:13 AM


I found that humorus. though i would have liked you to put in a 'slow train come'n'...
ice
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8 posted 2006-04-29 07:09 AM


Dylan was, and still is a great influence in my life...I heard "Blowin' in the wind" at a crossroads in my life, it started me down "The road less traveled by" (Frost)
I dropped out, and never looked back..

Good stuff, paul...I enjoyed your poem

----------ice
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shades of paul
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9 posted 2006-04-29 08:56 AM


Thanks Debo, I thought it would be a refreshing  change of pace........paul

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shades of paul
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10 posted 2006-04-29 08:58 AM


Thank You for your reply Hope....
May you stay forever young.
paul

shades of peace,love,and happiness to you

shades of paul
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11 posted 2006-04-29 09:02 AM


Slow Train Coming, one of my favorites,
I play and sing alot of those tunes.
Thanks for the comments Shmity72.
paul

shades of peace,love,and happiness to you

shades of paul
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12 posted 2006-04-29 09:04 AM


Dear Ice, thanks for the warm response.....
                 paul

shades of peace,love,and happiness to you

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