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miabug
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0 posted 2006-04-21 07:43 AM


Flower

In your hands, a Flower
A Display of wonder
Little, shy and insecure
With a heart so warm and pure

In your hands, a teardrop
A Flower’s dying crop
Insanity, infinity
Impossible to be

In your hands, a caress
A Flower’s repaired mess
Gentle patience, understanding
A Flower starts to sing

20 avril 2006 - by Marie-Ève C.


Mia

Rainclouds lie in your tears, sunshine in your heart. When you cry from happiness, you glow as a rainbow. - Marie-Ève C.

© Copyright 2006 Marie-Ève C. - All Rights Reserved
passing shadows
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1 posted 2006-04-21 07:59 AM


this is pretty
poettothecars
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2 posted 2006-04-21 08:33 AM


a singing flower, playing a tune

now that is a good one

a poet who cares

StevenS
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3 posted 2006-04-21 08:40 AM


In loving hands I would expect nothing less than miracles miabug. I love to hear the flowers when they sing! :-)
XOx Uriah xOX
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4 posted 2006-04-21 01:39 PM


::smiles::    beautiful!   Such a sweet and tender melody!    I hear a lotus singing.
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5 posted 2006-04-22 12:36 PM


This made me smile as I picked your number for the challenge and I love flowers.  Hope you like me continuation of it.
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The Lady
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6 posted 2006-04-22 01:01 AM




"A Flower starts to sing"

Perfectly beautiful miabug. I have heard flowers sing early in the morning when the dew fills their hearts. Thank you.

Seymour Tabin
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7 posted 2006-04-22 01:28 PM


Mia,
Not many people know that flowers sing.

Juju
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8 posted 2006-04-22 01:57 PM


Lovely

-Juju

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Poet deVine
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9 posted 2006-04-23 04:48 AM


What a delicate poem! I loved it.
backtash123
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10 posted 2006-04-23 08:44 AM


This poem was short and sweet. It expressed to me with innocense of my childhood what a flower is. I loved this, because it speaks to itself first, and the reader reads it understanding what they like.
scorpio
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11 posted 2006-04-23 09:01 AM


Beautiful in its fragility...

believe in what your heart feels...

Enchantress
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12 posted 2006-04-23 09:36 AM


This is so lovely Marie-Ève.
Enjoyed so very much.
Hugs~Nancy

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  in doing so, you touch my heart ~

shades of paul
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13 posted 2006-04-23 08:08 PM


Very nice !
paul

shades of peace,love,and happiness to you

Martie
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14 posted 2006-04-23 08:18 PM


Lovely!!  
Les Gartner
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15 posted 2006-04-23 08:33 PM


Very pretty and very charming. A lovely poem.

Les

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