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Debo
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since 2006-04-18
Posts 321
Texas U.S.A.
0 posted 2006-04-20 08:25 PM


I'm lost in this cloud of smoke
Walking blind never looking behind
Waiting for my star to shine.

As each day slips into the past
I't gone forever can't get it back.

Trying to live my life
Walking on the right path.

It ain't easy with the devil whispering
Take another toke as the room
Turns into a cloud of smoke...

Debo
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StevenS
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since 2005-09-21
Posts 945
L. A. (Lower Alabama)
1 posted 2006-04-20 09:07 PM

Welcome Debo, been there done that! That sucker is always whispering something. You just gotta plug your ears with something better. Like the inspiration and new friends you'll find here at PiP. :-)
The Lady
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634
The Southwest
2 posted 2006-04-21 12:22 PM


Nicely done Debo. An enjoyable read. Welcome!
Debo
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since 2006-04-18
Posts 321
Texas U.S.A.
3 posted 2006-04-21 05:04 AM

Thanks for the kind words
Of encouragement I have liked what I've read so far here in PP.

Debo
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