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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2006-04-20 08:02 AM



cannibal of cans
yawning her gut bottom willing
without hands to help her hunger
she pants her gasses no-eyed

who will walk her green valley
with their spike shoe piety
swinging their graphite phallics
at wanna be satellites

then tipping the beer girls
with the laundry dollar empty
of the proper women pining
their bimmers down macy row

and on the morrow will she return
in her shalloon of smaragdine
with a craving just for clay
will she swallow their skinerey

and belch their bones as innocent pines
______________

daark


scribblenote: land fill/golf course/cemetery combination

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Sunshine
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1 posted 2006-04-20 09:41 AM


smaragdine:  Of or relating to emeralds.

~*~

One always, always, learns from you...


Dark Stranger
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2 posted 2006-04-20 10:29 AM


ms sun...well it is a nice green lawn..thanks lady friend
Klassy Lassy
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3 posted 2006-04-20 05:36 PM


Under pine boughs hidden appetites and emerald fire. Green lawns? But no lure in asphalt jungles, spiked heels, or ice.  Forgoing the granite, and the graphite...  Stone faces?  Boxes...

This is definitely daark.  


~ Klassy

sorry, had to edit.  Kept thinking about this one.

[This message has been edited by Klassy Lassy (04-21-2006 01:49 AM).]

The Lady
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4 posted 2006-04-21 12:37 PM



"In blue shalloon shall Hannibal be clad."
- Swift.

You never miss Stranger. I would like to see with your eyes for only a few minutes. I am not greedy. Envious perhaps, but not greedy.





Dark Stranger
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5 posted 2006-04-21 07:40 AM


ms kl...oh I do love your edits..when your mind goes places and plays and then your proper erases the footprints.  Thanks for the touch.

______________

lady ms, thank you for the comments, the glass of my eyes is always nearly empty as the holes of my mind are never filled, still want em for a bit?

Klassy Lassy
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6 posted 2006-04-21 04:43 PM


With your poems, I must always look beneath the surface.  Sometimes, that is a challenge!  LOL  
The Lady
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7 posted 2006-04-21 10:49 PM



Sure do Stranger. I long to see what you see.


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