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Dominique-Simone Senior Member
since 2005-11-12
Posts 643
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It is simple smiles on little mouths transform into jaded laughter the pig tails bounced with joy now fall plainly on her back it was a miracle she survived this long mistakes ours punish her and the little girl who played hop scotch sits alone at the window clinging to soft curtains watching the wind It is simple |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
You have this way, Dominique. Reading this was like remembering (not always a good thing, for me, but an event, nevertheless.  )You're good. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
I have to agree with serenity Page... you're good. I love this sad little girl. |
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Dominique-Simone Senior Member
since 2005-11-12
Posts 643 |
Thank you both... I am at a loss for words |
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WindWalker Senior Member
since 2001-10-12
Posts 1218 |
Yes you are very good. I like how you wrote this!!!!!!!!! |
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Dominique-Simone Senior Member
since 2005-11-12
Posts 643 |
Thanks .. Wind.. |
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