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Paula Finn
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since 2000-06-17
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missouri

0 posted 2006-04-19 12:08 PM



Fractured crystal eyes
betrayal like a fine wine
upon his lips that
  
        whisper crystal lies
        letting her love slip away
        while she's silently
  
crying crystal tears
no longer held enchanted
believing no more

        


  
  

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Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348
Florida
1 posted 2006-04-19 01:18 PM


and she learns to read lips.

it's but a lesson.

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
2 posted 2006-04-20 09:29 AM



"crying crystal tears
no longer held enchanted
believing no more"

Crying 1

EA


JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
3 posted 2006-04-21 06:15 PM


Nice writing...James
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