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Bodger
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Tolerance for a short time

0 posted 2006-04-18 04:34 PM


I lost this and I need to rewrite it and I haven't checked the spelling but it is of a failed romance and not mine

Dave

A small squat idea of idea approaching on paved steps to a metalled door ringing a sound I can't recall that open'd something I think words are words in recall

Like a tomb'd walls dressed with black lit only by candles and beanbags rea-ranged as you would a chicken shack for comfort

Candles dwarfed in darkness beanbags in seeding head in contact backwards as bean bags in candles epitomised motion to another future

In movement and motion I was an observer of a failed romance

Dave Page


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