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death's child (my first post :) )
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death's child (my first post :) ) |
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lil_miss_punk New Member
since 2006-04-17
Posts 3 |
death's child i sleep, curled up in my cradle of sorrow dreaming dreams of a lost tomorrow, i awaken, crying out for another and feel the icy embrace of my mother. she sings with a voice silenced by time, her unbeating heart pressed against mine. i look up into her loving face her eyes are a dark and empty place her fingers in my gossamer hair cold and boney, soothing my fear. i feel myself drifting, the sleep of the dead she lays me down in my satin lined bed and leaves me, curled up in my cradle of sorrow dreaming dreams of a lost tomorrow. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LilMiss~ Welcome to PiP ! A sad and touching first post~ You convey the sorrow well~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Hitting close to home, this does... a beautifully sad poem to make a debut... Welcome to Passions! Please, check your email for a Special Greeting! " It matters not this distance now " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love |
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gypsyheartx Member
since 2006-02-09
Posts 104Istanbul-Turkey/U.S.-Maryland |
I absolutely love this it's beautifully written. I can't wait to read more of your poems. Excellent work!! |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Excellent, lil_miss! Welcome. I'm waiting for more. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
A nice flow...James |
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