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Open Poetry #37

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Paper Tiger
Member

since 2003-09-28

Posts 77

0 posted 2006-04-17 03:10 AM

Step through this door,
naked and unadorned,
into a world unsung;
and tread wildly down an empty road,
where cracks in the air,
and all the spaces that exist between,
collide with my implicit nature
to see with eyes not half shut.

Those who dream by day are cognizant of many things which escape those who dream by night.

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

1 posted 2006-04-17 09:14 PM

I enjoyed this a lot, and really love the unknown - probably why I enjoyed my interpretation so much I ould guess.

[This message has been edited by Mysteria (04-17-2006 10:06 PM).]

soul drifter
Senior Member

since 2004-09-08

Posts 711
Colorado

2 posted 2006-04-18 12:12 PM

Very beautiful. Like the first thought in the morning...

also, good to see someone else loves Sea Change like I do. 'Paper Tiger' is awesome...

"I'm the soul drifter, and I'm out of this town, ain't no use hangin' round, you see" -- Lindsey Buckingham, 'Soul Drifter'

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