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openthoughts Member
since 2006-01-16
Posts 94Where the child can be free |
I found this poem hiding in the corner of my sent and saved email and it stirred up so many encoded painful memories. Memories of what it's about, the time it's from, and the desperation it was written out of. I was so young and so unaware... Unwanted Wishes 1. Soon you may be in my Hands 7. Evermore imagining Existing sands 2. Unnoticed by the Little world around 6. Death Pertains to unsturdy ground 3. Inside My heart I feel the rust 5. In the Everlasting faded dust 4. Captured time forever blind |
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Paper Tiger Member
since 2003-09-28
Posts 77 |
This is such a unique concept for a poem. I absolutely love it. Those who dream by day are cognizant of many things which escape those who dream by night. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wow I like this! |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I had fun with the numbers and re-aligning the lines, in different concepts. Neat! |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
the pain is evident in your acostic; I hope things are going much better now. miscellanea |
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