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Juju
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In your dreams

0 posted 2006-04-17 01:09 AM



You know I'm glad to have met you
sometimes I smile when I see you
and some how forget to say hi

You cock your head and smile
I believe at a 45
degree angle like notice me

I am a horrible person
dizziness could be a talent
But it is not profitable

cause suddenly you're gone from me
And I wrap my arms around me
Wishing I wasn't defective

I wish you'd forget about me
But then I'd wish you'd remember...
I’m sorry I’m undecided

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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
1 posted 2006-04-17 08:28 AM


you are not horrible...and  I have felt this way before

sometimes wrapping my arms around myself...

"dizziness could be a talent
But it is not profitable"
^  ^   ^    ^
like these lines


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2 posted 2006-04-17 09:18 PM


I think we have all been in this place.  Next time maybe open your mouth and speak girl.  LOL, who knows?
Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
3 posted 2006-04-17 09:26 PM


I like the lines Maureen quoted...

and you made me remember a boy/man...

and that brought a smile.

Thank you, for that, alone.




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