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Bodger
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since 2005-06-12
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Tolerance for a short time

0 posted 2006-04-16 08:01 PM


You zapped around like the revenue dancing on targets moving in a sheen so fast only the revenue could pay

You always made me pay the Health Insurance I wasn't 98 at the time

Whisp's

In the family

Dried and starched

and the furniture to boot

if only it could stretch a boot examing space

in an upwards direction

and with the revenue

we would have a firm tax base for Government

And A bunch of people

Who we class as furniture

On the grounds that they need

They're facilities

Pity they can't in fact

Swear that the words they utter

Are Law

© Copyright 2006 Dave Page - Cirencester UK - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
1 posted 2006-04-16 08:21 PM


Your poems
are always a treat
of sound
dialect
thoughts that transfer
yet share
from sea to sea

thank you, Dave

" It matters not this distance now  " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love
~*~
KRJ

Bodger
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since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260
Tolerance for a short time
2 posted 2006-04-16 08:25 PM


Sunshine

I always go over the top

And you are most considerate

Take care

Dave Page

Ericc
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since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178

3 posted 2006-04-17 12:39 PM


Over the top is where the treasure often lies.

Great work!

Eric

Bodger
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since 2005-06-12
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Tolerance for a short time
4 posted 2006-04-18 03:13 PM


It was just a bunch of nonsense Eric

A sounding off but at least I didn't liken them to a set of trees

I have respect for trees

Dave

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