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nakdthoughts
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0 posted 2006-04-16 07:59 PM



Thought Breaks

It's the Silver Raz speaking my mind
missing you and the sheerness thoughts
that are clothed in black
that rearrange the play of words,
the slight of hand, mine a secret
of Victoria's.

Worded by Bacardi, sending smiles throughout,
for I am dancing in my mind
with the tallness of, slowly methodically
loving the feelings that fill me to blush
when touching are the thought breaks
of this evening.

A second look tonight,
to catch yesterday's dreams, when
ever so gently does the silence capture me
into the warmth of vanilla, leaning back
to remember...and remember...
and remember...

M




"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

© Copyright 2006 Wynter Bliss - All Rights Reserved
serenity blaze
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1 posted 2006-04-16 08:10 PM


oooooooooooooooooooooooh Lady...

it's like you're dancing with yourself!

this is very sensual and sexy and still somehow sweet

You look lovely in "secrets".

nakdthoughts
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2 posted 2006-04-16 08:13 PM


hey you..I don't drink often...it's the Bacardi ( 2 of 'em and I am done in)
  

M
p.s. hope you had a nice Easter...

Enchantress
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3 posted 2006-04-16 08:14 PM


"for I am dancing in my mind
with the tallness of, slowly methodically
loving the feelings that fill me to blush
when touching are the thought breaks
of this evening."

WOW!!  This is extremely beautiful Maureen.
Love this keeper!
Hugs~Nancy

~ Trace my body with your words,
  in doing so, you touch my heart ~

poettothecars
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4 posted 2006-04-18 01:02 PM


I don't drink alcohol, but I think I know Victoria's secret

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nakdthoughts
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5 posted 2006-04-18 04:47 PM


well I hardly ever drink...but the wine coolers were nice and cold after working out in the yard on a warm day.

And yes, I think we all know Victoria's secret
thanks

M

poettothecars
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6 posted 2006-04-18 06:07 PM


5316
Of Such Naked Thoughts

19 April 2006


Where beauty was between the line
of such naked thoughts
A pureness as unto birth
her heart all of value to encounter

A kiss, a tear, happiness to linger
oh where, oh where, had tomorrow gone
This place of everlasting love
a happening to dutifully embrace

Has beauty got a name
marvel to asunder
No one to put down
her secrets another to dream

Such magnetic force
an attraction across an ocean
An abridgement of amour
heaven, God made that too


© 2006 Christopher W Herbert (a New Zealand Poet)

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Martie
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7 posted 2006-04-18 06:13 PM


Maureen...You look lovely in this one!
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