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musicalfusion
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0 posted 2006-04-16 11:18 AM


I dream to be:
To be a help to those in need
I dream to do:
To do good deeds that encourage people

I hope to say:
To say things no-one else would say
I hope to see:
To see inside of people's hearts

I wish that all:
That all will live in harmony
I wish that we could:
We could stop all wars and violence

I desire to help:
To help the people of this world
I desire to save:
To save people from all poverty

I pray for children:
For children who are lost and lonley
I pray for the lives:
For the lives of those in pain

I dream,I hope,I wish,I desire,I pray
For us all to live together as one
One dream,one hope,one wish,one desire,one prayer
We can all live in peace




R.E.M.

© Copyright 2006 Rachel Marriott - All Rights Reserved
Seymour Tabin
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1 posted 2006-04-16 11:26 AM


musicalfusion
Nice thoughts.

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
2 posted 2006-04-16 11:38 AM


"I dream,I hope,I wish,I desire,I pray
For us all to live together as one
One dream,one hope,one wish,one desire,one prayer
We can all live in peace"

~ Amen! Hallelujah! Bless your loving heart!

Your words were music to my heart and soul!

Peace, Love, Light, and Harmony,
Earth Angel

latearrival
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3 posted 2006-04-16 01:10 PM


Nothing wrong in those wonderful wishes. Good luck and may you fulfill  your dreams.
martyjo

Sunshine
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4 posted 2006-04-16 08:23 PM


I hope that all of your dreams come true!


The Lady
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5 posted 2006-04-17 12:08 PM




"I dream,I hope,I wish,I desire,I pray
For us all to live together as one"

Wonderful musicalfusion. Never give up your dreams.


passing shadows
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6 posted 2006-04-17 09:57 AM


this is a wonderful write
Susan Caldwell
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7 posted 2006-04-17 10:36 AM


Wonderful wishes...just keep in mind there seems to be a balance that must be abided by..   and also some of those hearts you seek to see may not be worthy of your look..

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

musicalfusion
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8 posted 2006-04-17 12:10 PM


Thanx for your comments guys i'm glad u enjoyed it

*****Rachel*****

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