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ThisDiamond
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Michigan, USA

0 posted 2006-04-13 10:39 PM



An east coast breeze in subtle ease
Lifting warble to sky
On the shear of an ink tip
Melting water colored verbs
Into cool mountain tops

Clear as rain
Nettle and Columbine bloom
Against new leaves on old ground
Happy hearted greetings
Not quite conducive to song

A smile kept upon a string
Each moment to another bring
Busy now in buzzword wakes
How much longer tender takes
Sigh and jasper throat

Ending on a happy note

Might this be the antidote

For what I cannot say


Copyright Kkh 4/13/06

© Copyright 2006 Kathleen Harris - All Rights Reserved
The Lady
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634
The Southwest
1 posted 2006-04-13 11:02 PM




"Clear as rain
Nettle and Columbine bloom
Against new leaves on old ground"

Your descriptions are so lovely and clear
TD. I greatly enjoyed this poem.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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2 posted 2006-04-14 04:42 AM


I'm in awe
StevenS
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since 2005-09-21
Posts 945
L. A. (Lower Alabama)
3 posted 2006-04-14 10:31 AM


A poem is no less beautiful than a song. And this is a beauty TD. :-)
WindWalker
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since 2001-10-12
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4 posted 2006-04-14 10:57 AM


WOW; this is beautiful, just beautiful!!!!!!
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5 posted 2006-04-14 04:14 PM


Such beauty, yet such ache as well....Hoping
you enjoy Easter, and the bunnies don't run
off your feet!

Goldenrose
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since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665

6 posted 2006-04-14 05:09 PM


A precious pearl of a poem..thank you..

Goldenrose.

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