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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Repost: Condensed Paintings of singular call Harangue and hang and brood my wall Points of paint induced in meld Produced while my breath was held Brought to a myopic bed Mental gold with pigments lead Colors brought to symbols light Dimensions of hyper sight Tender phantoms caught in draw Brushed and fixed in pigments store Caught and held in final goal Gems implanted by my soul To me they are my total cry Dramatic as a Van Gogh sky Reinforced in poets rhyme Memories of my loves and time Post in boast my soul in sprawl These ghosts that hang upon the wall |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Good to read encore Sy!! believe in what your heart feels... |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Ah a sigh of paint from Sy, what better day could this be?  |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
I'd love to view those paintings of yours, Sy...with my eye!  |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Sy, But what if the picture never comes out? I just wrote one about the need to portray my father before he died, yet I didn't have the skill. I'm trying to think of the title... "Too Much for the Untrained Eye". Sure wish my walls weren't bare! I'm trying to do something about it finally, hoping to sketch the sparks of memory. In this, I'm glad you were fortunate. I very, very much liked your poem and will file it away. Thank you. miscellanea |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"To me they are my total cry Dramatic as a Van Gogh sky Reinforced in poets rhyme Memories of my loves and time And it's such a lovely cry with poems and your Van Gogh sky I makes all our hearts fly to read your words dear Sir Sy or something like that... |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
O' Sonneteer, ye be an artist with both brush and pen!  Loveya! EA  |
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Androgynous Member
since 2006-04-08
Posts 71 |
"To me they are my total cry Dramatic as a Van Gogh sky Reinforced in poets rhyme Memories of my loves and time" I've said it before, and I'll say it again, you have a way with rhyme  Love "How happy is the blameless vestal's lot! |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Sey, you've gone and done it again, left me sighing at the beautiful artistry of your words. Hugs dear man. |
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