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Open Poetry #37

Addictive

curiouse
Member

since 2006-03-21

Posts 277
england

0 posted 2006-04-13 06:09 AM

What is it that is so addictive about you?
Whenever I turn away,
You don’t let me,
Without doing anything
My eyes are drawn to yours
As if there is a force pulling me towards you
And you grin
Knowing what is going on
Knowing all those feeling locked up inside me
But I feel free with you
I am ready to let go
I am ready to inhale and proceed

There is some kind of energy between us
Of which I have never felt before.
Stay true to it,
Stay true to me

That tingly feeling that I can not dispose of
Those laughs that I can not let go of
You of which I can never take my mind off.

Us the two that will be together for ever
Us the ones which surprised the world with their love
Me and you the ones that will never be apart.

i'm looking for you...always...

i'm looking for you...always...

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

1 posted 2006-04-13 07:39 AM

I loved all but thought the last verse was not needed to feel the love...forever is a very long time

M

HopeS
Member Elite

since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

2 posted 2006-04-13 11:51 AM

Loving feelings you expressed sure are addictive

Hope

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

3 posted 2006-04-13 05:17 PM

"Without doing anything
My eyes are drawn to yours
As if there is a force pulling me towards you
And you grin"

Perfect curiouse.

bubblesleave
Member

since 2006-03-04

Posts 197
Bloomington, IN

4 posted 2006-04-13 10:45 PM

This is so very intense.

Couldn't stop reading once I started!

Great Write!!!
Bubbles

aliway
Member

since 2006-03-05

Posts 185
With in your eyes

5 posted 2006-04-14 01:38 AM

Lovely, just lovely!
Don’t know what to say but you two seem great to gather

*Leah

curiouse
Member

since 2006-03-21

Posts 277
england

6 posted 2006-04-14 05:13 AM

thankyou everyone for your commenets.
smiles,
curiouse

i'm looking for you...always...

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