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nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2006-04-12 01:28 PM



Between My Thoughts

I kiss the memory tonight
as you lay between my thoughts.
Covered by your warmth,
dreams of tomorrow
take me to sleep.

I count the many ways
you touch my heart,
the softness
of your whispered words,
the treasured hold
of arms that surround,
eyes that reach and pull me
into their depths.

Lonely, I shall never be,
as long as you lay
between my nakedthoughts...

Remember These?

When you smile at me with sight
Caressing me in fading light
Craving touches, gentle love
Needed words, your guidance of.

Each morning fills my senses so
Sighing, warming in the glow
Released by you in waves to find
My hopes of real, those dreams of mind.

As daytime swirls to eve's decline
I hold your hand as you hold mine
In loving arms and lips of kiss
Comforting in nighttime bliss.

Remember these, the words once shared
In silent speak in echo's lair
My favorite lines will end my thoughts
In velvet strappings, yours, I'm caught.

"Till sleep takes talk, to dreams light
You slip to dream, my day's last sight."


M (reminiscing just because)

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

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Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
1 posted 2006-04-12 01:57 PM


Maureen, this is one of the most beautiful pieces of romantic writing I have read in a long long time.

I'm gently placing this one into my 'keeper' folder.

Hugs~N.

~ Trace my body with your words,
  in doing so, you touch my heart ~

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines
2 posted 2006-04-13 05:40 PM


Thank you Nancy..sometimes I forget how to write this way...so I am trying to remind myself of the "Romantic" in me.


M

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