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passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

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0 posted 2006-04-12 12:07 PM

Paint Me In Oil

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Paint my love for you in oil,
like an abstract over time,
smoky visions, peaks and valleys,
foggy sadness and sublime.

Paint my heart in oil,
the colors suit it well,
blues and grays softly blend
with tints of opaque shell.

Paint my life in oil
so that my memory may live on,
you were all there was to me,
the oranges and the reds of dawn...
faded from the painting, gone.

~

poettothecars
Senior Member

since 2006-02-10

Posts 1093
New Zealand

1 posted 2006-04-12 12:54 PM

great expression, thanks for sharing

a poet who cares

latearrival
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since 2003-03-21

Posts 5499
Florida

2 posted 2006-04-12 01:15 AM

Softly sad,very nice, You Are Loved

Klassy Lassy
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since 2005-06-28

Posts 2187
Oregon

3 posted 2006-04-12 02:10 AM

The colors are so tender you would choose to paint your feelings, but I think you have an opaline heart, rare and full of embers and magic--

Your poem is beautifully moving.

~ Klassy ~

Honeybunch
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since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

4 posted 2006-04-12 02:29 AM

Yes, Dixie - I have to ditto Klassy's comment. Beautiful write!

bubblesleave
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since 2006-03-04

Posts 197
Bloomington, IN

5 posted 2006-04-12 04:52 AM

Very beautiful and very touching.

Hugs,
Bubbles

Goldenrose
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since 2003-05-30

Posts 3665

6 posted 2006-04-12 05:43 AM

Your talent shines like the sun in a painting..well done..enjoyed this one..thank you..

Goldenrose.

Toerag
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since 1999-07-29

Posts 5622
Ala bam a

7 posted 2006-04-12 08:07 AM

Honey...have you seen the price of oil these days!!!!!????...I'll finger paint ya?....

luminosity
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since 2005-11-18

Posts 813

8 posted 2006-04-12 09:20 AM

wow....this is beautifully painted lady...your talent is amazing

kayjay
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since 2002-06-24

Posts 2015
Oregon

9 posted 2006-04-12 09:34 AM

What a pleasure to wander in to Pip and find this gem. Very nicely done! Ken

Through rubble and trouble and dark of night
The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light

StevenS
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since 2005-09-21

Posts 945
L. A. (Lower Alabama)

10 posted 2006-04-12 09:36 AM

Beautifully sad PS. But an artist like you can paint another picture. :-)

passing shadows
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11 posted 2006-04-12 09:40 AM

poettothecars, thank you for reading and leaving your thoughts

martyjo,

thank you

Klassy, what a fine reply! I'm blushing. Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed.

Helen, thank you, you have me blushing too

Hi Sharon...glad you enjoyed this. Thanks for reading.

Phil, thanks my friend

Toe, honestly! You cheapskate! LMAO You know I luv ya

luminosity, you are too kind...thank you so much

passing shadows
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12 posted 2006-04-12 09:41 AM

Ken and Steve

you snuck in on me here LOL

thanks for the comments! I love them!

playing.with.crayons
Member

since 2006-01-02

Posts 362
Neverland

13 posted 2006-04-13 11:03 PM

"Paint my heart in oil,
the colors suit it well,
blues and grays softly blend
with tints of opaque shell."

A gem this is indeed. beautiful write.

farewell the ash-tray girl

passing shadows
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14 posted 2006-04-14 07:49 AM

cheye, thank you so much
glad you liked this

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