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FNG
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0 posted 2006-04-11 06:25 AM


Bags under my swollen eyes,
Titter tatter spots and freckles.

Lines crawl over my face,
told of roads travelled.
Of years not marvelled,
by any other.

Midrift bulging
After years of indulging.
Into my thirties,
OH!! how discouraging....

Aging.

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Martie
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1 posted 2006-04-11 11:23 AM


Yep....I know what you mean.  Just remember it's the inside that counts....if we take care of things there then we just get better!
passing shadows
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displaced
2 posted 2006-04-12 10:03 AM


I've been down those roads too


Earth Angel
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3 posted 2006-04-12 10:09 AM


Oh, dear. I think you need a hug.

I do believe we all tend to be more critical of ourselfves than others are.

Once I learned to relax, so did the lines on my face!

Love & Light,
EA Flowers
P.S. Take it from me, mirrors lie! Flirty 2


FNG
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4 posted 2006-04-13 12:12 PM


Thanks for your comments
nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
5 posted 2006-04-13 07:07 PM


and only in the thirties...

(smiling 'cause I know better)
M

FNG
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6 posted 2006-04-18 08:00 AM


Im consoled now that i know im defintely not alone in this!! thanks everyone   No BOtox for now! lolx
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